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(P.S: TMOM's part of the rp)

THUMP! THUMP! THUMP!

The very earth shook in fear as The Morbidly Obese Man makes his way to the ring. His massive form taking up the whole width of the entrance ramp as each step he took left an impression on the steel ramp. The ring sighs under his weight as he enters it. The crowd looks on in awe, in fear and in disgust as the more than rotund man grabs a mic and speaks.

The Morbidly Obese Man: "As you all know, this fool of a wrestler named Brosumthin' wants to take me on in the ring. He thinks he can defeat me in the ring but I shall reiterate now that the one who will suffer come our match is him! C'mon seriously now do you all think he stands a chance to defeat me?"

The crowd collectively shouts out a loud "NO!!!"

The Morbidly Obese Man: "Yet who am I to stop a fool from plunging to his own demise? If he wants to kill himself to provide all of you some entertainment, who am I to deny him that? But wait, let us give him one last chance to say his peace before I snuff out his little unimportant life."

The Morbidly Obese Man waits for Brostar, or A. J. Brostar to come out.

(P.S: My part of the rp)

"Get Ready To Fly" by GRITS play as A.J. Brostar walks out to the entrance ramp.

A.J. Brostar: Hey TMOM I was hearing you in the back saying I can't beat you. Well you maybe right and I may never beat you but I will not surrender and I will not give up. And I am pretty sure that these fans are 100 percent behind me. Am I right?

The crowd repeatly chant "Brostar".

A.J. Brostar: I though so, and that is because I am The Phenomenal One A.J. Brostar.

"Get Ready To Fly" by GRITS plays as Brostar walks to the ring for his match against TMOM.
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Re: Scorpy this is my latest rp with TMOM Tell me whatg you think
« Reply #1 on: April 10, 2010, 12:21:01 PM »
Depends on your character I suppose, but you've almost said he's going to win. He's insulted you, and youve said maybe he'll win - give him some bad mouthing, should be easy as a he's a big fat pile of lard ;)

Looking a lot better but have some fun with it, talk about his rolls of lard and how the grease bucket will tire himself out just climbing into the ring or something - remember all the fat kid jokes from school and channel the, recycle some fat 'yo momma' jokes ;)
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Re: Scorpy this is my latest rp with TMOM Tell me whatg you think
« Reply #2 on: April 10, 2010, 08:01:20 PM »
I'm serous when it comes to rping.
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Re: Scorpy this is my latest rp with TMOM Tell me whatg you think
« Reply #3 on: April 10, 2010, 08:02:49 PM »
Here is another one
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Re: Scorpy this is my latest rp with TMOM Tell me whatg you think
« Reply #4 on: April 10, 2010, 08:15:15 PM »
(P.S: My part)

“Get Ready To Fly” by GRITS plays through out of the arena as a men walks the entrance ramp he is wearing a red hoody over his head. He climbs into the ring, gets a mic takes the hood off and speaks.

Brostar: I am “The Phenomenal One” A.J. Brostar. I have come back after 3 months of absent I was going back to WaW but since it fell into bankruptcy I can’t then I thought about going to EWI, EXCITEMENT, BTWE or SSW but they also fell into bankruptcy so I when back to Development for more training. Then one day a man walk up to me it was JoJ. Him and I when back to his office and we talked and talked then we finally came to an agreement and he gave me a 3 month contract to WHW. That right I’m back with a whole new attitude and a whole new style.

The crowd repeatly chant “Brostar”

A.J. Brostar: And Since my match is next I’m issuing an open challenge to anyone in the locker room.

Brostar stands there waiting for his opponent.

(P.S: TMOM's part)

THUMP!!! THUMP!!! THUMP!!!

The arena shook at each step The Morbidly Obese Man took as he makes his way through the newly enlarged entrance tunnel. Stopping at the top of the entrance ramp the leviathan wrestler spots Brostar in the ring and starts laughing.

The Morbidly Obese Man: "I was wondering what tough guy is out here shouting a challenge, I come out and all I see is this little gnat."

The look of amusement slowly turns to that of disappointment.

The Morbidly Obese Man: "And here I was thinking that this place will give me some challenge but looking at you, I guess taking over this joint will be easier than I thought. Why dont you go to yer mama before your curfew is over kiddo. You're no match for me, I know it, the crowd here knows it so you should know it as well."

(P.S: My Part)

A.J. Brostar: All I know is I'm going to beat you up so bad. All of that fat in your body will swell up and you will explode. I have been in the ring with the best for example when I was in WaW I face one of the greatest in the his name was Jason Storm he is one of the best in there. Even though I lost I did my best. Now why don't we just cut the chit-chat and get on with the match. Ring the bell.

(P.S: TMOM's part)

The Morbidly Obese Man: "Whoa! Feisty little gnat are we? You talk big for someone so tiny but alas! It is not you who handles my paycheck. You want to fight me? Ask the general manager to book the match."

The big wrestler eyes Brostar and shrugs.

The Morbidly Obese Man: "I guess it wouldn't hurt if I made an example out of you, a message will be sent to the whole roster on who's the big man around here. I hope you have a good funeral plan kiddo, co'z by the time I am done with you, the only place you'll be heading is the morgue."

The Morbidly Obese Man shoves the mic in between his love handles and heads back through the tunnel as the earth reverberated less and less as he walks farther away.
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