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Brostar

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« on: March 26, 2010, 04:50:07 AM »
*Killswitch hits as CM Punk makes his way down to the ring*

Punk: Syn now u may have beaten me last nite, but tht was just fight in this new war, see u claim ur straight edge but yet u refuse me as ur savior and for tht i must make u see the light. I have found sum1 who will help me in my quest. Guards please bring down my guest.

*security comes out accompanying a young woman*

Punk: Hello wat is ur name?

Woman: My name is Nikole

Punk: and how do u know Syn?

Nikole: Syn and syrus are my big brothers, and I cannot
believe the way they have been acting lately, they need u Punk as they're savior, they are falling off the path of Straight Edge!

*Hate Me hits and Syn comes out*

Syn:Whoa Punk thts my baby sister u leave her out of this!
Punk: Syn Nik came here on own free will, u see she know tht I am a voice of a new generation! The Genearation of STRAIGHT EDGE! I am ur savior I am all of these mindless drons savior they need me and u need me!

*Syn walks down to the ring and get in*

Syn: Nik wat r u doin? this moron isn't lying to u! I havn't left Straight edge nor do I plan to * Looks at Punk* Now u got 30 secondsbefore I beat u like I beat u last night!

*Nikole kicks Syn in the nads and allows Punk to Nail the GTS*

Nik: Brother u will join!

*I am...All of me plays as brodie runs down and makes the save and throws Punk out of the ring*

Brodie: Punk you will have a match at Over the Limit it will Punk and Nikole vs Saiosyn and a Diva of his choosing.

*I am...All of me plays as Brodie and Saiosyn walk out.

~The Camera fadea away~
« Last Edit: March 26, 2010, 05:00:03 AM by Brostar »
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Re: Rp
« Reply #1 on: March 26, 2010, 08:04:22 AM »
Friendly advice for future RPs: try to avoid talking in chatspeak.  It's not going to make me want to tune into a show to hear things like "wat is ur name?"

Not everyone's an experienced writer, but even those who aren't can make an effort with spell check in Microsoft Word or using something like http://spellcheck.net/.
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Re: Rp
« Reply #2 on: March 27, 2010, 04:00:16 AM »
Bro - I said id help you for a while, so do your best and then PM me so i can tweak and edit for you :)

Please dont use real wrestler names though, a little originality is far more enjoyable to read.
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Re: Rp
« Reply #3 on: March 27, 2010, 04:24:00 AM »
That wasen't my rp it from my CAW Fed site.
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