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[Brostar]

The lights flash on and there is a man standing in the ring he has orange hair, wearing blue T-Shirt and green shorts. He began to speak on a Microphone.

Brostar: Hello everyone and welcome to a new era. My name is Brostar and I am the GM of a new Fed I like to call Friday Wresting Acting.

The crowd start chanting “FWA”. Brostar started smiling. He continued talking on the Mic.

Brostar: I became GM because I want to give people a chance to show what they got.

The crowd started cheering.

Brostar: If the Wrestlers don’t like how I run things on this fed. I will show them the door.

Brostar: If they want to quit I would be fine with that but they can’t come crying back to me saying the regret leaving and want to come back because I won’t allow it. You only get one chance in this Fed.

The crowd started chanting “Brostar”.

Brostar: I will work my hardest and never give up. All of you can join us on this wild adventure with FWA because this new era will be unstoppable.

-The camera fades away-

[Brostar]

How is my rp?

[Snapshot]

Maybe it's just me, but I don't think you've taken into account just how much extra information we NEED to be drawn into an RP.

You walk out, but we don't know what you look like. We know you're the GM of a fictional fed? Ok. If you JUST started it, why are there fans, and why are they cheering for it?

I like background, I like seeing a world that you're creating. If you don't give me that, then how can you expect me to want to stay?
BE DESCRIPTIVE OF EVERYTHING.

[Scorpy]

Should I juse copy all of the comments that you ignored from your last - how is my rp? Thread?

[Brostar]

I did my best. But I am still learning.

[Scorpy]

to learn you need to take note of the constructive criticism and develop.